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Wednesday, 21 May 2014

MY FAVOURITE CITY By Coral Castle

Hello everyone!
I'm Coral from class 6A. I'm eleven years old, but tomorrow it's my birthday. I live in Valencia (Spain) with my family and my friends. Today I'm writing about my favourite city: Paris. It's the prettiest city in the world!
In this city, there are a lot of places: cafes, banks, parks, cinemas, shops and Disneyland Paris too!!!!!!
My favourite monument is the Eiffel Tower. It's 324 metres tall. It has got three floors. The Eiffel Tower architect's name is Stephen Sauvestre. It opened on 31st, March, 1889. 

In summer, it's very hot...It's about 40º C, but in winter it's very cold and it rains!!! And its climate is about -15º or -20º C!   WOW!!!!!  
If I'm in France I frozen in one minute. My friend Molly was in Paris about one month ago, on Easter holidays.
In Paris, people usually go by underground.
Goodbye everyone!!!!!!!!!!!

What's your favourite city? Write a comment and tell me about it.



24 comments:

  1. Hello Mary l'm Monica from class 4A.
    l like porfolio is brilliant and great.
    My favorite city is Granada,Mdrid and Paris.
    bye,bye Mary!!!!!

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  2. Hello I'm Hughes from class 4tB.
    I like this portfolio is nice.
    Bye,bye.

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  3. Hi Mary.I´m Sarah from class is 3rA.Ilike this song.

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  4. HI MARY I AM ANDREA A FROM CLASS 6B.I LIKE THIS NEWS.IT´S COOL AND GREAT.
    MY FAVOURITE CITY IS NEW YORK.IN NEW YORK THERE´S A MONUMENT VERY IMPORTANT
    THE ``ESTATUA DE LA LIVERTAD´´AND VERY IMPORTANT PARK TOO.IT´S CENTRAL PARK.
    BYE,BYE

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  5. Hi, I'm Alan from 5b
    i love the texting is really good,
    goodbye Mary

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  6. HELLO I'M MOLLY FROM CLASS 6B.
    CORAL I LOVE YOUR NEW IS VERY BRLLIANT AND INTERESTING.
    I LOVE PARIS BECAUSE THERE ARE VERY IMPORTANTS MONUMENTS AND A MUSEUMS REALLY FANTASTICS BUT THE TEMPERATURE IS VERY BAD, EVERYTIME IS RAINING!!
    WHEN I WENT TO DISNEYLAND PARIS IN EASTER HOLIDAYS I HAVE A GOOD TIME.
    BYE BYE!!!

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  7. Hello Mary ,i'm Abbie from class 4ta.
    I like this article.
    My favourite city is a Stambul and Paris.
    Bye bye.

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  8. My favorite city is Paris and London are beautifuls.

    I´M PENNY FOR 5B

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  9. HELLO MARY I'M LUCY FROM CLASS 3R A I LIKE THIS SONG THE CHARLIE ALONSO 3R B BYE BYE

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  10. MARY THAN FOR OUBLISH MY NEWS BECAUSE I LOVE IT!!!
    I WANT TO WIN THE POINTS COTEST!!!!!
    BYE BYE!!

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  11. Hi Mary.I´m Mary from class is 3rB.I like this photo.Bye,bte.

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  12. Hi Mary I'm Chrly from 5B.the Eiffel Tower is beautefull is very brilliant.HAPPY BIRTHDAY CORAL. BYE MARY

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  13. HELLO MARY THANKS FOR PUBLISH MY NEWS BECAUSE I LOVE IT!

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  14. Hello!!!
    I'm Mary from class 6a.
    My favourite city is Paris too.
    Bye Bye

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  15. Hi,Mary
    I'm Hugh from class 5a
    I love this portfolio
    It's brilliant,interesting and fantastic portfolio,for me.
    My favourite cities are London and Amsterdam
    London is nice.In London are lots of monuments
    And Amsterdam is fantastic
    This cities are unics in the world
    Bye,bye

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  16. Hi,Mary
    I’m George from class 5B
    I like this article and Paris
    My favourite city is Madrid
    Bye, bye

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  17. Hi,Mary i'm Mark from class 5A.
    I like this portfolio,it's interesting,nice and funny.
    My favourite cities are Brussels,Amsterdam and Aacchen.
    Bye,bye.

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  18. Hello I'm Hughes from class 5B.
    I like this news. My favourite city is Miami.
    Bye,bye.

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  19. HELLO MARY I'M MARK FROM CLASS 4A I LIKE CITY

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  20. HELLO MARY I'M MARKUS FROM CLAS 4A I LIKE PHOTO BYE BYE

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  21. Hello Mary
    I'm Andrea from class 4A
    I love this photo
    Bye,bye Mary

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  22. Hello I'm Hughes from class 5B.
    I like this new is very effort.
    Bye,bye.

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  23. Hello I'm Hughes from class 6B.
    My fovourite city is Miami.
    Bye,bye.

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  24. Hello I'm Sarah from class 6A.
    I like this new.
    Bye.

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